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Pat Johnson |
The Coffee Bean Babies
Far away on the other side of the world a
village rests on the face of a dark mountain. Early every morning when the
villagers awake from their night time dreams they hurry out into the sunlight.
Dressed for a day of work, they walk together to their fields.
Today they get a surprise; the mountain looks different. It is covered
with crawling things that look like coffee beans. They are everywhere up and
down the side of the mountain. The villagers wonder what has happened. Then
they hear a baby’s cry. They are little
brown babies, cute and plump and solid, crawling on the mountain.
They are not really crying. The sound is more like babbling. The babies
seem very happy but none of the villagers know where they have come from. The
villagers have their own babies; they
don’t need any more although they are very fond of babies. There are no adults
with the babies, not one to feed them or look after them.
Soon all the children are in the fields playing with the new babies,
swinging them in the air, and cuddling them; watching and talking to and loving
them. The babies do not pay much attention to the village children who are
pushing and pulling them about, lugging them around to show their friends.
Those coffee bean babies are just happy. But when they get the chance, they
want to crawl. They are exploring everywhere.
Yes, now the villagers see that there is something familiar about them –
they remember that whenever babies come, something unusual happens. They can
only wait and see. As they look along the mountainside the babies are crawling
through their crops and fields.
The sky turns black and the babes stop, afraid. Thunder rumbles and rain
pours down. When the sky clears, the villagers notice that now the babies have
wings, heavy, solid clumsy wings that will never fly.
The fields are full of crawling babies, babies crawling through the
cabbages and potatoes, and the carrots and the pumpkin, and the wheat, pulling
up all the roots as they drag their heavy wings. The villagers are stunned. As
they slide over the wet ground they try to figure out what they should do. Everyone
is worried that they will have nothing to eat if the babies ruin all their
crops. But how to remove them? They cannot rake them up and push them to the
side; they will not stay.
The villagers who have always loved babies are beginning to hate them. They
start to run. They run away from the babies, away from their fields. They run
because they are confused and afraid; afraid that they might hurt the babies
and they know that they should not do that. They know they can only wait and
see. But they are so angry that the babies are destroying all the food they
have planted, they run down the mountainside, run away to get to a place that
feels safe.
When they are far down the mountain, they look back and see the babies
in the distance. The little babies are like a colony of ants on the
mountainside. Now the villagers can
think. What will happen if it rains again? Then, there is a long deep rumble,
like thunder, but the sky is clear. All the men and women of the village are in
the valley, but their own children are still up there playing. When they look
upward, they see their own children moving around among the crawling babes.
There is another, very loud rumble. The children are startled and they
start to run down the mountain to their parents. As they run they feel the
ground moving underneath them.
The mountain itself is trying to shrug off the itchy, annoying little
insects that are crawling around on its surface. The skin of the mountain is itching.
Its rumbles are getting louder and louder. The trees are shaking loose and
falling down. Rocks are tumbling. The whole mountain explodes. The babies are thrown
into the air, crashing into each other.
Meanwhile, the children have made it down the mountain and are with
their parents again, very glad to be there. In silence they strain their eyes
to see the babies, who have stopped crashing and whose heavy wing cases are falling
to the ground.
Then the villagers hear a faint buzzing. Fine gossamer wings are
bursting out of the babies shoulder blades, allowing them to fly and setting
them free. The excited babies buzz loudly. They group together in a ring above
the mountain. They are beautiful! The sun breaks through changing them from
brown to gold. The light bouncing off the golden babies gives out a glare that
hurts the eyes.
All the trees and rocks, the moss
and streams, everything that the mountain had thrown off, is settling back
down. Everything is returning to the mountain. Even the village itself, tossed
high and far into the clouds, is finding a new spot to rest. Nothing is as it
was. And as things nestle into different and awkward positions, the sun continues
to blaze brightly on the babies, a hovering ring of gold.
The villagers are beginning to
recover. They think the mountain may have become quiet once more. They start to
trek upward to where the village teeters back and forth. As they walk, shards
of gold fall from the sky, decorating the fields. Looking up, they see the
babies disintegrating, breaking apart and dropping silently, as softly as
snowflakes drifting though the air. The falling gold has no weight; it floats
quietly until it settles on the ground. But as soon as it settles, the gold is
sucked below the surface. Rapidly down it goes, deep into the cold centre of
the mountain. The ground rumbles and shifts again, shrugs and resettles.
The villagers trudge upward, unworried
because the mountain has restored itself and the mountain is their home. It has
all happened very fast. The little coffee bean babies are gone. The villagers
didn’t have to do anything. They didn’t know what was happening or what to do
but it didn’t matter. Everything is okay again – but different. They head
toward their village which is still tottering back and forth, up and down, left
and right. They watch as it tilts to one side, then topples right over! They
climb upward. Tomorrow they will start fixing, repairing and rebuilding.
Far into the heart of
the mountain, they go. When they have gone far enough they lay down and cover
themselves in furs and go to sleep deep in the earth where it is dark and
quiet. They are part of the mountain that does not change. And as they sleep
they grow strong.
Pat, is there something biblical about this story?
ReplyDeleteIt is a lot like a parable isn't it? but parable generally is the language of religion. I'm not sure that the moral is all that clear though, which is fine, because I had no moral in mind when I wrote it. It was much more to do with starting with the metaphor and letting the reader work back to what they found it meant for them.
ReplyDeleteYes, I like that opening to possibilities. The writing becomes a gateway to contemplation and imagination.
ReplyDeleteI like it, a lot. You don't always understand the meaning of stories, and they mean different things to different people. Some of my favourites are unfathomable! This story reminds me of a Leunig cartoon.
ReplyDeleteWow, that's interesting! I hadn't thought of Leunig, but I think so too. And something about emotional impact that bypasses the rational. I always liked e.e. Cummings poetry for that creation of meaning in the spaces between the words, like the negative space of a drawing. Leunig does something similar. His cartoons affect me, but I don't always know why.
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